Well done Bree! My preliminary thoughts I think visually the light blue would complement the girl and work well for the font that goes with the girl. What font are you using? Maybe we should see how it works with capitals like the Herman Miller style? The nine-ten-twelve could work well if we spelled the numbers as well as used the numerical. Somehow we need to create some more visual hierarchy on this one - color-wise, size etc. The "tween" is a little too dominant. When we animate it, maybe we could make the tween squeeze itself out of the word "between" - it would give a visual parallel to that age period. I will get some more vectors up as well tomorrow + see if I can add Emma's first attempt at our preliminary script for everyone to hear. Great work everyone! s
Well done Bree!
ReplyDeleteMy preliminary thoughts
I think visually the light blue would complement the girl and work well for the font that goes with the girl. What font are you using? Maybe we should see how it works with capitals like the Herman Miller style? The nine-ten-twelve could work well if we spelled the numbers as well as used the numerical. Somehow we need to create some more visual hierarchy on this one - color-wise, size etc. The "tween" is a little too dominant. When we animate it, maybe we could make the tween squeeze itself out of the word "between" - it would give a visual parallel to that age period. I will get some more vectors up as well tomorrow + see if I can add Emma's first attempt at our preliminary script for everyone to hear. Great work everyone! s